Messy Mountain

I filled in the last three boxes of my story mountain during today’s W.W. I just added my character’s feelings/thinking in blue to the mountain when I got home. Then I started thinking that I shouldn’t have done that since (pink), I now think I want to have my main character’s, Ava, best friend, Nita, narrate the story. Therefore, she’ll have to show what Ava is thinking and feeling as she narrates.

Revisions, revisions, revisions…